Drifting through the world
dragging his chains along behind,
chains he attached after she left him,
chains that make his heart hard to find.
No one has told him
that its ok that he got hurt,
that he needs to destroy the cage he's built,
to just leave the chains of heartbreak in the dirt.
Set your heart to wings dear sir,
and leave the pain of her on the ground,
soar on to a better life,
and allow love once again to be found.
Staring off after him,
the one she thought would never leave,
with every step he pulled out the string that held her heart together,
the string she uses for the cloth of darkness she now weaves.
No one has told her
that its ok that he walked away,
that she needs to rip through her burial cloth,
and rise from her living grave.
Set your heart to wings dear girl,
and leave the pain of him on the ground,
soar on to a better life,
and allow love to once again be found.
Oooooooooo
Set your heart to wings,
leave your tears to fill another's ocean of pain,
soar beyond the freedom of the heavens,
and never fear the touch of love again.













Comments
That was so AMAZING
I can so hear that being a song...
One of my favorite songs...
it's just so...
UGH
I dun even think there is a word for it yet.
Just the metaphors...
They were original and well done.
Great job!
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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |
i know how it feels
when love goes away.
tread softly.
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we can only see as far as the light shows, we never know what the end of the path holds, nor the twists and turns the path takes until we are upon them
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we can only see as far as the light shows, we never know what the end of the path holds, nor the twists and turns the path takes until we are upon them
Anyway, this is very, very well done. I'm connecting with it a lot more than I'd like to admit. Anyway, if I could fave this more than once, I would. It's truly beautiful.
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I rolled a natural 1 on my reality check.
i'm glad you liked this so much, i really appreciate it
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we can only see as far as the light shows, we never know what the end of the path holds, nor the twists and turns the path takes until we are upon them
The poem deserves anything i can heap onto it. ^^
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I rolled a natural 1 on my reality check.
Fate grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things that can.... and the weapons to make the difference.
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we can only see as far as the light shows, we never know what the end of the path holds, nor the twists and turns the path takes until we are upon them
A moving piece overall and just perfection.
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"Lassiez le bon temps rouler!"
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