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Set Your Heart to Wings by *soslovinsungirl:iconsoslovinsungirl:



Drifting through the world
dragging his chains along behind,
chains he attached after she left him,
chains that make his heart hard to find.
No one has told him
that its ok that he got hurt,
that he needs to destroy the cage he's built,
to just leave the chains of heartbreak in the dirt.

Set your heart to wings dear sir,
and leave the pain of her on the ground,
soar on to a better life,
and allow love once again to be found.

Staring off after him,
the one she thought would never leave,
with every step he pulled out the string that held her heart together,
the string she uses for the cloth of darkness she now weaves.
No one has told her
that its ok that he walked away,
that she needs to rip through her burial cloth,
and rise from her living grave.

Set your heart to wings dear girl,
and leave the pain of him on the ground,
soar on to a better life,
and allow love to once again be found.

Oooooooooo

Set your heart to wings,
leave your tears to fill another's ocean of pain,
soar beyond the freedom of the heavens,
and never fear the touch of love again.
©2008-2009 *soslovinsungirl
:iconsoslovinsungirl:

Author's Comments

another song

inspired by my friend's music

i'm quite fond of it, i hope you are too

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:icondoorfromheaven:
OH-EM-GEE...

That was so AMAZING
I can so hear that being a song...
One of my favorite songs...
it's just so...
UGH
I dun even think there is a word for it yet.

Just the metaphors...
They were original and well done.

Great job! :heart:

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconsoslovinsungirl:
oh my gosh thank you so much, i was really hoping for a response like this from someone, this is definately one of my favorites, i can't tell you how proud i am of this one, and i'm so glad you love it like i do, i especially love the metaphors i used for the girl :hug: :heart: :hug: :heart: :glomp:

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we can only see as far as the light shows, we never know what the end of the path holds, nor the twists and turns the path takes until we are upon them
:iconleonlinnea:
I find this piece to be very motivating. I must say that I'm fond of it, too. I think it makes a person realize what they can be involved in with their life, and that life is never going to halt. Nice work :)
:iconsoslovinsungirl:
thank you once again for your kind words, yes i like the thought of moving on, especially when you think you can't move an inch

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we can only see as far as the light shows, we never know what the end of the path holds, nor the twists and turns the path takes until we are upon them
:iconshadowwolf3117:
Wow. Just found this via your dA-Corner interview... and I regret nothing. :D

Anyway, this is very, very well done. I'm connecting with it a lot more than I'd like to admit. Anyway, if I could fave this more than once, I would. It's truly beautiful.

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I rolled a natural 1 on my reality check.
:iconsoslovinsungirl:
i hope you enjoyed it =)


i'm glad you liked this so much, i really appreciate it

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we can only see as far as the light shows, we never know what the end of the path holds, nor the twists and turns the path takes until we are upon them
:iconshadowwolf3117:
I absolutely enjoyed it. ^^

The poem deserves anything i can heap onto it. ^^

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I rolled a natural 1 on my reality check.

Fate grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things that can.... and the weapons to make the difference.
:iconsoslovinsungirl:
thank you once again, you do me and my poem great honor

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we can only see as far as the light shows, we never know what the end of the path holds, nor the twists and turns the path takes until we are upon them
:icondreamerzsonata7:
AMAZING!!!!!!!!! This is one of your best yet! The metaphors are moving and perfect for the song. I wanna hear this one with music very very soon.
A moving piece overall and just perfection.

--
"Lassiez le bon temps rouler!"

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